Your EE Deserves an A — Clastify Helps You Earn It
Subject
English A Extended Essay
Topic
Sense and Sensibility
Draft Score
20/34
Final Score
31/34
The Challenge
Sofia had always been passionate about literature, so when it came to choose a topic for her English A Extended Essay, she knew she wanted to explore Jane Austen's Sense and Sensibility. She spent weeks reading, analyzing themes, and drafting her essay. But when she finally submitted her first version to her supervisor, she received only brief feedback and a low predicted mark of 20/34
Like many IB students, Sofia found herself frustrated and uncertain about how to move forward. Sofia knew she had strong ideas, but she didn't know how to present them in a way that would fully meet IB expectations for understanding, analysis, and critical thinking.
The Clastify Solution
That's when she decided to try the Clastify Review service. After submitting her EE, Sofia was paired with an experienced IB English A Examiner and EE Supervisor who had marked hundreds of essays just like hers. Within a few days, she received detailed, criterion-based feedback that clearly explained where her draft fell short and how to strengthen it.
The reviewer didn't just point out what to fix. They explained why certain sections needed revision, from refining her research question to improving transitions between literary analysis and contextual discussion. The reviewer also helped Sofia with understanding how to apply proper MLA referencing, paragraph structure, and how to integrate quotations effectively without disrupting her argument's flow. She appreciated that the feedback was specific and encouraging, making the revision process feel manageable rather than overwhelming.
The Outcome
Over the next few weeks, Sofia reworked her essay based on Clastify's feedback. She applied the reviewer's feedback step by step, revising her essay until each paragraph felt purposeful and polished, just like the EEs from Clastify's database that received a grade of A. When she completed her final draft, she felt genuinely confident for the first time in months.
Now, with her Extended Essay finalized and stress-free, Sofia can focus on preparing for her final exams, knowing that her EE is the best it can be.
"Everything suddenly felt really easy and stress-free"
Sofia
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