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Applicant

Application Year:

2024/2025

Major:

Physics

Studying at:

Carnegie Mellon University
University Status
Accepted
Carnegie Mellon University
Rejected

No Rejected Applications

Demographics
International

Gender

Male

Ethnicity

Black or African American

Country

Saint Vincent and the Grenadines

High School Type

Private School
Academics at a Glance
Completed 6 IB Exams

1400 SAT


Key Activities & Awards
State/Regional
Honorary, MISE Olympiad Program
StopDiabetes
Created a website with guidance from health professionals to raise awareness about Diabetes and teach adolescents how to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

Essays
The Appointed One: Embracing Community and Identity
Common App
Prompt 1

Accepted:

Carnegie Mellon University Application

Application Year:

2024/2025

Successful Application3 Essays

Many students pursue college for a specific degree, career opportunity or personal goal. Whichever it may be, learning will be critical to achieve your ultimate goal. As you think ahead to the process of learning during your college years, how will you define a successful college experience?

Why This College

Consider your application as a whole. What do you personally want to emphasize about your application for the admission committee’s consideration? Highlight something that’s important to you or something you haven’t had a chance to share. Tell us, don’t show us (no websites please).

Most students choose their intended major or area of study based on a passion or inspiration that’s developed over time – what passion or inspiration led you to choose this area of study?

Why This Major