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Applicant

Application Year:

2024/2025

Major:

Business Management And Administration

Studying at:

Carnegie Mellon University
University Status
Accepted
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Demographics
First Generation
Low income

Gender

Male

Ethnicity

Asian

Country

United States

High School Type

Private School
Academics at a Glance
Completed 1 AP Exams

1490 SAT


Key Activities & Awards
National
Gates Scholarship Finalist
Incendio Wand
Made $15k total profit; Sold business; Gained 150k+ followers/subs; Managed 2 freelancers; Handled organic/paid marketing; Provided customer support;

Essays
From Hot Potato to Quantum Chess: Balancing Family, Business, and School
Common App
Prompt 1

Accepted:

Carnegie Mellon University Application

Application Year:

2024/2025

Successful Application3 Essays

Most students choose their intended major or area of study based on a passion or inspiration that’s developed over time – what passion or inspiration led you to choose this area of study?

Why This Major

Consider your application as a whole. What do you personally want to emphasize about your application for the admission committee’s consideration? Highlight something that’s important to you or something you haven’t had a chance to share. Tell us, don’t show us (no websites please).

Many students pursue college for a specific degree, career opportunity or personal goal. Whichever it may be, learning will be critical to achieve your ultimate goal. As you think ahead to the process of learning during your college years, how will you define a successful college experience?

Why This College