Clear, specific population (Orthodox yeshiva students) and setting (Jerusalem).

Clear focus on a specific tradition (Church of England) and a concrete issue (ordination of women).

Uses a short, direct prompt that signals an analytic aim (how).

Specify the tradition and element explicitly (e.g., replace vague terms with a named tradition and a concrete belief, practice, or text). Before: How does do the five work? After: How do the Five Pillars of Islam shape daily religious practice among Muslim communities?

Clear topic focus in terms of presenting a research area (World Religions) and form as a question.

Specify a traditional focus and an element to study. Example: rewrite to "How do Christianity and Islam define and practice ritual purity, and what scriptural or doctrinal sources support these understandings?"