The student effectively bases their work on one of the 35 prompts released by the IBO, specifically addressing how current knowledge improves upon past knowledge through the examination of three specific objects: a spirit level, a remastered album, and a plastic syringe. The exhibition includes a commentary that meets the maximum word count and clearly identifies the objects, all of which existed prior to the assessment and are not generic. While the student explains the connections between the objects and the prompt, they need to provide more sufficient evidence and clear references for their claims, particularly regarding the spirit level. Overall, the student maintains focus on the prompt without including irrelevant information, ensuring a coherent exploration of knowledge and its improvements.
