The student has successfully based their TOK exhibition on one of the 35 prompts released by the IBO, specifically Prompt No. 23, and has presented three specific objects: ancient Egyptian papyrus, Nicéphore Niépce’s first fixed camera, and the book “Le Buveur D’encre.” Each object is accompanied by a detailed commentary that clarifies its real-life context and historical significance. However, the student has not clearly explained the connection between the chosen prompt and each object, nor how they contribute to the exploration of the prompt. Additionally, there is a lack of sufficient evidence and clear references for the statements made regarding the selected prompt, and the inclusion of an unnecessary introduction detracts from the overall precision of the exhibition.
