The student's TOK essay is based on one of the 35 prompts released by the IBO, specifically focusing on the prompt "Should some knowledge not be sought on ethical grounds?" The essay fulfills the requirement of presenting three objects alongside a commentary within 950 words, with each object clearly linked to the chosen prompt. The real-life context of each object is effectively communicated, and the objects chosen are specific rather than generic, contributing to the exploration of the prompt. Furthermore, the student provides sufficient evidence and clear references for each statement made, avoiding any irrelevant information that would hinder the precision of the Exhibition.
