The student has successfully based their TOK Exhibition on one of the 35 IBO prompts, specifically "What is the relationship between personal experience and knowledge?" They have presented three specific objects, including the Old Pajero Sport, Taylor Swift's "The Man" lyrics, and a scene from "Oppenheimer," accompanied by appropriate commentary within the word limit. However, the student has not clearly explained the real-life context of each object, nor established strong connections between the objects and the prompt. Additionally, they have not provided sufficient evidence or relevant references to support their statements, and unnecessary introductory information has been included, which detracts from the precision of the exhibition.
