The student's work is based on the IBO prompt 20, 'What is the relationship between personal experience and knowledge?', and the entire essay revolves around exploring this prompt, fulfilling the criterion. The exhibition includes 3 distinct objects accompanied by detailed commentary, staying within the word limit of 950 words, meeting the specified criterion. The real-life context of each object is clearly provided, and all three objects existed prior to the creation of the exhibition, meeting the respective criteria. The objects chosen are specific and directly related to the student, fulfilling another criterion. However, the student could further explain the connection between the chosen prompt and each object, as well as how each object contributes to the exploration of the prompt, to meet those criteria. The student provides sufficient evidence and clear references for each statement made, and the exhibition does not incorporate any irrelevant information, meeting the final criterion.
