The student's work is based on one of the 35 prompts released by the IBO for the examination session, specifically prompt 24. The Exhibition consists of 3 objects presented alongside a commentary within the specified word limit of 950 words, and all the objects are clearly linked to the chosen prompt. The real-life context of each object is made clear to the reader, and none of the objects have been created for the purpose of the assessment - all existed prior to the creation of the Exhibition. Additionally, the objects chosen are specific rather than generic. However, the student needs to improve in clearly explaining the connection between the chosen prompt and each object, as well as in explaining how each object chosen contributes to the exploration of the prompt. The student also needs to provide sufficient evidence and clear references for each statement made in regard to the selected prompt. Lastly, the student should ensure that there is no irrelevant information incorporated in the Exhibition that would make it unconvincing or hinder its precision.
