The student has based the TOK exhibition on one of the 35 IBO prompts, specifically "Can new knowledge change established values and beliefs?" and has clearly identified three specific objects linked to this prompt. However, the exhibition does not meet the requirement of a maximum 950-word commentary, which is a significant oversight. While the real-life context of the objects is well articulated, the student struggles to effectively explain the connection between the prompt and the objects, leading to a superficial commentary. Additionally, the student's references and evidence are insufficient, and the inclusion of generic information detracts from the overall precision of the exhibition.
