The student's TOK Exhibition is based on one of the 35 provided IA prompts and includes three objects, each with a written commentary. The objects are clearly identified and pre-existing, but the specific real-life context of the chosen objects is not clearly identified. Additionally, the links between the objects and the selected IA prompt are not well-explained, and there is a lack of strong justification for the contribution each object makes to the Exhibition. The commentaries also lack convincing and precise arguments, with little explicit references to the selected IA prompt. Therefore, the student should work on strengthening the connections between the objects and the IA prompt, as well as providing stronger justifications and explicit references in the commentaries.
