The student has identified a focused and detailed topic for their investigation, specifically examining the influence of parachute vent size on terminal velocity. The research question is relevant and fully focused, directly addressing the specific relationship between the diameter of the parachute vent and its impact on terminal velocity. The physics behind the investigation is explained comprehensively, ensuring a clear understanding for the reader without the need for rereading. Additionally, the methodology of the investigation is clear, easy to follow, and focused on addressing the research question, with steps to assure the relevance and reliability of the collected data. The student also demonstrated full awareness of safety hazards associated with the investigation, indicating a responsible approach to safety considerations. However, there is a need for the student to address ethical and environmental issues relevant to the procedure in their essay, which was not done.
