The student clearly states the title of the essay at the beginning, making it apparent to the reader. The focus of the essay is consistently maintained on the role of observation as an essential yet flawed tool in both the Natural Sciences and History, with relevant examples supporting the discussion. The essay effectively links different Areas of Knowledge, providing convincing real-life examples and considering implications and counterpoints to the arguments presented. The student demonstrates an awareness of various perspectives and evaluates them critically, ensuring the essay remains argumentative rather than merely descriptive. Additionally, the work is well-organized, includes proper citations for external sources, and is structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
