The student has made the chosen title clear at the beginning of the document, effectively introducing the topic of knowledge acquisition and its impact on wonder. However, the essay lacks sustained focus on the title, as it deviates from exploring how knowledge affects wonder to a less relevant perspective. The connections made to different Areas of Knowledge are superficial and could apply to any AOK, indicating a need for more explicit links. While the student provides real-life and conceptual examples to support their arguments, these examples are not convincingly backed by evidence, and implications or counterpoints are not adequately considered. The essay demonstrates awareness of different viewpoints and maintains a critical and argumentative tone, with a well-organized structure and proper referencing of external sources.
