The student clearly states the title of the essay on a title page, ensuring it is apparent. They maintain a sustained focus on the title throughout the essay, effectively discussing the benefits and drawbacks of severing ties with the past in the natural sciences and the arts. The student provides relevant and convincing real-life examples that support their arguments, while also considering counterpoints and demonstrating awareness of different perspectives. The essay is well-organized, critical, and argumentative, with all external sources appropriately cited and referenced. However, the work could have benefited from a broader linkage with the Natural Sciences' Area of Knowledge, rather than focusing too specifically on individual disciplines.
