The student has effectively made the chosen title clear in the submission by placing it on the title page. The essay's focus is sustained on the chosen title, avoiding digressions or irrelevant information, fulfilling this requirement. Real-life and conceptual examples are provided, convincingly supporting the argument being made. The student also shows awareness of different points of view and evaluates them. The work is well-organized with an introductory paragraph, main body sections, and a concluding paragraph. However, the essay lacks explicit links to different Areas of Knowledge, and it needs to consider implications or counterpoints of the arguments to improve. Additionally, some examples lean towards being more descriptive than necessary, and the essay needs to be more critical and argumentative rather than descriptive.
