The student has effectively made the chosen title "Nothing is more exciting than fresh ideas, so why are areas of knowledge often so slow to adopt them? Discuss with reference to the human sciences and one other area of knowledge." clear and apparent in the submission by placing it at the beginning of the document. The essay’s focus is sustained on the title chosen, avoiding digression or irrelevant information. The student also provides real-life or conceptual examples, and these examples are convincing and efficiently support the argument being made. However, the work could be improved by effectively linking with different Areas of Knowledge and considering implications or counterpoints of the arguments. The student also needs to evaluate different points of view and ensure that the essay is predominately critical and argumentative rather than descriptive. Overall, the work is well-organized with an introductory paragraph, main body sections, and a concluding paragraph, and all external sources of information are appropriately acknowledged and referenced.
