The student's chosen title is clear in the submission, but there is an error in the title number. The essay's focus is not sustained on the chosen title and includes some irrelevant information not directly linked with the indicated Areas of Knowledge (AOKs). The examples provided are not always appropriate for the AOKs, and the implications or counterpoints of the arguments are not clearly considered. However, the student does show awareness of different points of view and takes a critical and argumentative approach in the essay. The work is well-organized with appropriate referencing of external sources.
