The student has effectively addressed the chosen title, maintaining focus and avoiding digressions. They have made clear connections between their work and different Areas of Knowledge, using both real-life and conceptual examples to support their argument. The examples provided are convincing and efficiently support the argument being made. Additionally, the student considers implications and counterpoints, demonstrates awareness of different points of view, and evaluates these perspectives. The essay is predominantly critical and argumentative, rather than descriptive, and is well-organized with an introductory paragraph, main body sections, and a concluding paragraph. However, the student needs to ensure that all external sources of information are acknowledged and referenced using an appropriate citing style.
