The student effectively presents the chosen title and maintains a sustained focus on it throughout the essay, without including digression or irrelevant information. The work is well-organized and effectively linked with different Areas of Knowledge, supported by real-life and conceptual examples that are convincing and efficiently support the argument. However, the student needs to consider implications or counterpoints of the arguments and evaluate different points of view and approaches towards the topic in order to improve the overall quality of the essay.
