The student effectively divided the Internal Assessment (IA) into clear sections: "Introduction," "Main Body," and "Conclusion," facilitating a logical flow of information. However, the body lacked further subdivisions to indicate the exploration phases, and the topic was not clearly stated in the introduction, which could have clarified the focus of the investigation. While the conclusion successfully summarized the outcomes and the exploration was generally clear and understandable, there were issues with the presentation of graphs and tables, as well as the formatting of the document, which did not adhere to specified guidelines. Additionally, the bibliography required improvement to ensure all external sources were properly referenced. Overall, the IA demonstrates a solid structure but needs refinement in several areas for greater clarity and adherence to requirements.
