The student lists several textual features and authorial choices from the work in the essay, demonstrating an understanding of how elements like color contrast, body language, and language contribute to positive representation. The analysis is convincingly linked to the chosen topic, focusing on the portrayal of black women in American and British Vogue, particularly highlighting how visual elements and language reinforce themes of empowerment. However, the student does not adequately interpret or evaluate how these features effectively convey the chosen topic, lacking depth in explaining the impact of color schemes and body language on audience perception. Overall, while the student showcases strong analytical skills, there are areas that require further development to enhance the interpretation and evaluation of the textual features.