The student does not demonstrate a thorough understanding of the literal meaning of the text, as they fail to include a clear summary of the main events and characters in *The Things They Carried*. However, the student convincingly interprets the indirect meaning of the text, particularly through the analysis of symbolism that reveals the psychological burdens of the soldiers. The essay features a focused and informative thesis statement in the introduction, which is effectively explored throughout the body paragraphs. The interpretation is insightful, addressing larger implications and subtleties of the text, and the analysis, interpretation, and conclusions directly relate to the thesis. Additionally, the references chosen are well-selected and support the arguments presented in the essay.