The student lists several textual features and authorial choices from John Oliver's work, such as his use of satire and humor; however, these could be more specific in terms of the types of satire and humor employed. The student's analysis is convincing and insightful, effectively demonstrating how Oliver critiques political responses to the pandemic, particularly through comparisons that highlight government inadequacies. The analysis is directly linked to the chosen topic and thesis statement, reinforcing the inquiry about raising awareness. While the interpretation of some authorial choices is mostly convincing, certain aspects are not fully explained, indicating a need for clearer articulation. Overall, the student evaluates Oliver's choices effectively in terms of their impact on the audience's understanding of the issues at hand.