The student does not correctly use subject-specific terminology relevant to the chosen article and key concept, as it lacks specificity; for instance, the term "negative externalities of consumption" should have been included. However, the incorporation of subject-specific terminology is evident throughout the work, showcasing a solid understanding of concepts related to tobacco consumption and government intervention. The student effectively utilizes terms such as "marginal private benefit (MPB)," "marginal social benefit (MSB)," and "allocatively efficient," while also accurately discussing "indirect taxes" and their impact on demand, price elasticity, and market outcomes.