The student includes diagrams that are relevant to the chosen concept and topic in the commentary. For example, Diagram 1 illustrates the shift in income inequality in India using a Lorenz curve, effectively supporting the discussion on income distribution. Diagram 2 demonstrates the impact of improved education on real GDP and price level, which aligns with the analysis of policies aimed at reducing income inequality. Each diagram included in the work is presented alongside an explanation, making its content and relevance clear to the reader. However, the labelling and accuracy of each diagram included in the work need improvement, as some mistakes or fallacies were noted, such as the absence of arrows showing changes in P and Y in Diagram 2. The student should ensure that each diagram is labelled and accurate to enhance the overall quality of the work.
