The student demonstrates a solid understanding of relevant economic concepts by incorporating subject-specific terminology effectively throughout the commentary. While the use of terms such as "indirect specific taxes," "sin tax," "inelastic demand," "supply curve," and "tax burden" is appropriate and enhances the analysis, the student has missed the opportunity to discuss "externalities," specifically the negative externalities associated with alcohol consumption. This omission indicates that while the overall use of terminology is strong, there is a need for more comprehensive coverage of key concepts related to the chosen article.
