The student outlines the topic of their study at the beginning of the essay, making its aim clear with a well-defined research question. They establish a clear context for the study by providing relevant background information on Kalanchoe and the bacteria involved, while the research question is appropriate given the available resources and time. However, the research question lacks clarity regarding independent and dependent variables, and necessary biology-specific background information is insufficient. Additionally, the methodology section fails to provide adequate details for replication, and the student does not clearly state the hypotheses or justify their choice of materials. Overall, while the student demonstrates a good understanding of the topic, there are several areas needing improvement for clarity and rigor in their research design.
