The student effectively outlines the topic of their study at the beginning of the essay, making its aim clear to the reader by presenting a title and a research question. Additionally, a clear context of the study is established, providing relevant background information, purpose, and focus. The scope of the research question is appropriate to the availability of resources, time, and the word limit, and the research question is directly relevant to Biology. The reader is also presented with the research question at the beginning of the essay. However, the detailed and focused research question could have been improved by providing additional information for each brand of honey utilized to fully contextualize the study topic. Nonetheless, the student has shown initiative and engagement in planning the study, conducting literature research, and selecting the most appropriate biological approach for collecting data. The document also clearly states the hypothesis that will be tested through the study, and the methodology section includes enough details for the reader to recreate the study.
