The student establishes a clear context of the study, providing relevant background information, purpose, and focus of the essay. The research question is detailed and focused, directly relevant to Biology, and presented at the beginning of the essay. The methodology section includes enough details for the reader to recreate the study, and the student has successfully obtained a sufficient amount of relevant data. However, the student should delete the initial outline of the topic and provide more biology-specific background information to fully support the relevance of the chosen plant. Additionally, the document should clearly state the hypothesis or hypotheses that will be tested through the study.