The student outlines the topic of their study at the beginning of the essay, clearly stating the aim to the reader. They establish a clear context for the study, providing relevant background information and a focused research question. The scope of the research question is appropriate to the available resources, time, and word limit. The research question is directly relevant to pharmacology and plant biology and is presented at the beginning of the essay. The student also successfully obtained a sufficient amount of relevant data, both primary and secondary, to support their study. However, the student needs to work on making their initiative and engagement evident in terms of planning the study, conducting literature research, and selecting the most appropriate biological approach for collecting data. They should also explain their decision and the choice of methods and materials used if they conducted their research in an external laboratory.
