The student clearly described and explained the research design, including the use of an independent measures design. However, the sampling technique was not adequately explained and the rationale for its selection may be considered unscientific. The description of the research participants was selective and insufficient, with no relevant characteristics explained. The choice of participants was also not adequately explained. On the positive side, the student stated and explained the controlled variables and the reasons for control, and also listed and explained all materials used.