The student has successfully identified a focused and detailed topic of the investigation, which is correctly stated on the title page. However, the research question needs further refinement to clearly describe the independent variable values used and follow a specific format. Additionally, the explanation of physics would benefit from visual aids such as graphs or models to enhance understanding. While the methodology is clear and easy to follow, there is a need to focus on addressing the research question and provide justification for the chosen range of independent variable values. On the positive side, the student demonstrates full awareness of safety hazards and includes steps to ensure the relevance and reliability of the collected data. However, there is no mention of ethical and environmental issues, which should be clearly addressed in the Risk Assessment section at the end of the methodology.
