The student has effectively subdivided the body of the work to clearly indicate phases of the exploration. The topic of the Internal assessment is clearly stated and explained in the introduction, providing a clear understanding of the exploration. However, the introduction lacks a general description of the student's approach to the topic and the methodology behind the rest of the investigation. Additionally, the conclusion fails to effectively summarize the findings and respond to the aim of the exploration. The use of technology and analytical software, if applicable, should be clearly indicated, explained, and referenced. The student also needs to ensure that the text is justified, all information outside the syllabus scope is properly referenced, and the pages are numbered in the correct format.
