The student has effectively divided the Internal Assessment into clear sections, including an introduction, body, and conclusion, which facilitates a logical flow of ideas. However, the body lacks further subdivision into distinct phases of exploration, which should be clearly indicated with appropriate section headings and consistent formatting. The student has clearly articulated the topic and approach in the introduction, and the conclusion summarizes the outcomes and addresses the initial aim. The exploration is clear and understandable, with logical connections between parts, and the use of technology is well indicated. Nonetheless, the student needs to ensure proper citation of external sources, address formatting issues, and provide explicit references to any analytical software used.
