The student had effectively divided the work into clear sections, including an introduction, body, and conclusion, allowing for an organised exploration that is easy to navigate. The body of the work was further subdivided, clearly indicating different phases of the investigation, which enhances the overall structure. However, the introduction lacks a clear and focused aim, and the mathematical concepts are not integrated properly, as they are presented in a separate section instead of being briefly described in the introduction. Additionally, the conclusion did not adequately summarise the outcomes or respond to the aim, and there are several formatting and referencing issues that detract from the clarity and professionalism of the exploration. Overall, while there are strengths in the organisation and use of technology, significant improvements are needed in the clarity of the aim, integration of mathematical concepts, and adherence to formatting guidelines.
