The student has successfully divided the work into sections, including an introduction, body, and conclusion. The body of the work is also subdivided to clearly indicate phases of the exploration. However, the topic of the internal assessment should have been stated more clearly and explained in the introduction, and the aim of the study should have been highlighted. The conclusion should have provided a summary of the outcomes and a response to the aim of the exploration, which is not obvious now as the aim was not stated. Additionally, the use of technology, including the software used, should have been clearly indicated and explained, with proper citation. Finally, unnecessary information should have been removed to improve the quality of the exploration.
