The student has successfully divided the work into clear sections, including an introduction, body, and conclusion, which aids in the reader's understanding of the exploration of L’Hemisferic's sustainable design. However, the body lacks further subdivisions to indicate phases of exploration, and the introduction does not clearly state the topic, which would enhance clarity. The conclusion is not concise and should be separated from the evaluation, and the exploration lacks clarity in some areas, necessitating a more logical presentation of information. While the use of technology and analytical software is well-described, there are issues with the presentation of graphs, tables, and citations, which require improvement to align with the expected standards. Overall, the exploration meets some formatting and length requirements, but there are several areas needing attention for clarity and structure.
