The student’s work is not clearly divided into sections, as the section titles were not presented appropriately, indicating a need for a proper numbering system. While the body is subdivided effectively to show different phases of the exploration, the introduction lacks a clear outline of the investigation and the areas of mathematics being utilized. Although the conclusion summarizes the outcomes well, there are issues with clarity throughout the exploration, including the logical flow of the content and the presentation of graphs and tables. Furthermore, the student did not adhere to proper citation practices for external sources and failed to center mathematical equations, among other formatting issues. Overall, while there are strengths in the subdivision of sections and the use of technology, significant improvements are needed in organization and presentation.
