The student has effectively divided the Internal Assessment into clear sections, including an introduction, body, and conclusion, enhancing the logical flow of information. The body is well-structured, with distinct subdivisions that indicate the phases of exploration, aiding navigation through the work. However, the introduction lacks a clear and explicit statement of the investigation's topic, which could have been framed within a broader context. The conclusion does not adequately summarize the outcomes or respond to the aims stated in the introduction, requiring improvement in this area. Overall, while the exploration is clear and utilizes technology effectively, there are several formatting and citation issues that need to be addressed.
