The student has effectively divided the work into sections, including an introduction, body, and conclusion. The topic of the internal assessment is clearly stated and explained in the introduction, and the conclusion effectively summarizes the outcomes and responds to the aim stated in the introduction. The exploration is clear and understandable throughout, and the consequent parts of the work are logically linked. Additionally, the graphs, tables, and diagrams are appropriately placed in the body paragraphs. However, the use of technology is not indicated and explained, and the font size inconsistency should have been addressed.
