The student's work is well-structured, with clear divisions into sections such as introduction, body, and conclusion. The introduction effectively explains the topic of the Internal Assessment and the student's approach, although the conclusion should have provided a more descriptive summary of the findings. The use of technology is indicated, and graphs, tables, and diagrams are appropriately placed within the body paragraphs. However, the exploration should have been 12-20 pages long, and unnecessary content should have been avoided.
