The student's work is well-structured with clear sections, including an introduction, body, and conclusion. The introduction effectively introduces the topic and research question, providing a general description of the student's approach to the topic. However, the conclusion is missing, which is a crucial part of the Internal Assessment. The use of technology is indicated and explained, but there are some issues with the presentation of analytical software and the placement of graphs, tables, and diagrams. The student has appropriately included large tables and additional diagrams/graphs as appendices. However, there are some formatting issues with the font, spacing, and page numbering. Additionally, some unnecessary parts could have been removed.
