The student has effectively divided the work into sections, including an introduction, body, and conclusion. The topic of the Internal Assessment is clearly stated and explained in the introduction, providing a general description of the student's approach to the topic. The use of technology is indicated and explained, although there is a missing citation for the analytical software used. The exploration is clear and understandable throughout, with consequent parts linked logically. The student has also ensured that there are no unnecessary or repetitive calculations, graphs, or descriptions. However, some improvements are needed in terms of providing a direct response to the research question in the conclusion and properly numbering the pages.
