The student's work is divided into sections including introduction, body, and conclusion, but there is no clear indication of where the main body begins. However, the body of the work is subdivided to clearly indicate phases of the exploration. The topic of the Internal Assessment is stated clearly and explained in the introduction, and the introduction includes a general description of the student's approach to the topic. The conclusion effectively summarizes the outcomes and responds to the aim of the exploration. The exploration is generally clear and understandable, with logical linking between different parts. The use of technology is clearly indicated and explained, but there are issues with the placement and referencing of graphs, tables, and diagrams. Additionally, there are some unnecessary or repetitive calculations, graphs, and descriptions that need to be addressed. Overall, the student's work shows a good understanding of the criteria, but there are areas that require improvement.
