The student's work lacks a clear division into three main sections: introduction, main body, and conclusion, with other sections being subsections of those three main sections. The introduction also lacks a description of the approach to the investigation and a short overview of the steps planned to reach the aims of the investigation. Additionally, the conclusion does not summarize the findings or respond to the aims of the investigation, and the use of technology, as well as the placement of figures, require clearer indication and explanation. However, the body of the work is appropriately subdivided, the topic is stated clearly and explained in the introduction, and the exploration is clear and understandable throughout. The work is of the appropriate length, uses the correct formatting and referencing, and does not contain unnecessary or repetitive elements.
