The student clearly names the political issue analyzed in the Engagement Activity as "how MNCs in the European fashion industry are changing their practices to prevent operating in an environmentally unsustainable way." This issue is introduced early in the document and remains central throughout. Additionally, the student provides clear and sufficient reasoning behind their interest in the selected political issue, explaining their interest in environmental sustainability through their personal background as a sustainable fashion advocate, a second-hand fashion business owner, and their participation in the Youth Forum Switzerland. Furthermore, the connection between the course content and the selected political issue is effectively made clear to the reader, with explicit discussions on how interconnected supply chains contribute to environmental harm, connecting the issue to the IB Global Politics course content.
