The student formulated a clear and focused research question, narrowing the investigation to young people's cultural backgrounds and their influence on environmental value systems and attitudes toward climate change. However, the phrasing could have been more concise and precise, specifying the scope of "young people" to avoid ambiguity and make the investigation more focused. The environmental issue of climate change is well-discussed with global relevance, supported by data on rising temperatures, melting ice caps, and greenhouse gas emissions. The inclusion of statistics from NASA and other credible sources strengthens the context. However, the connection between the research question and the environmental issue discussed was not explicitly developed, and the relevance of cultural background to climate change attitudes was implied but not explicitly explained. Strengthening the connection and providing a clearer explanation would have improved the overall coherence of the investigation.
