The student lists several textual features and authorial choices from the work in the essay, but this analysis lacks specificity and could benefit from direct references to elements such as symbolism and imagery. However, the student effectively analyzes these features, particularly how the setting of Soldier Island reflects Vera Claythorne's mental state, and convincingly links their analysis to the chosen topic of her gradual loss of consciousness. The interpretation of textual features is appropriately and convincingly done, particularly with marine imagery that relates to Vera’s memories and mental state. Nonetheless, there is a need for clearer connections between Vera's discomfort regarding Cyril's death and her psychological decline, as well as an evaluation of how contrasting character attitudes influence the audience's understanding of her deterioration.
